1. In Article I - Doesn't EPIC stand for  something? Should that be spelled out?

2. Article IV, section 4:

Proxy voting by signed written vote is possible, alo? LOL! I'm not sure what "alo" is meant to be here? Maybe  something is missing?

Article IV Section 9

 Section
  9:  Vacancies:
 
  A vacancy in any office because of death, resignation, or otherwise is to be  filled by a person nominated by the Executive Board at a special meeting.

Should that refer to a vote? So as to clarify that it's not an appointment by the EB but again a vote by membership. "Executive Board will present a nominee for member vote at a special meeting" or something
COPY EDITING NOTE THROUGHOUT DOCUMENT: There's no hyphen in Vice President. (That is,
there should not be.)

Article VI
Section
2: Voting Membership:
 
Only persons who meet the definition of “members in good standing” as determined  by the Organization under Section 3 may vote  in Organization business. 

should be vote "on" rather than "in" right?

Also, Members in Good Standing is sometimes capped, sometimes lowercase.

Section
4: Removal of Membership:

A member may be removed for failing ..

Hmmmm.... are we really removing the member? Or are we
revoking the membership from a person? I'd change to "A person's membership may
be revoked" so it's clear we're not the Mafia! Or Lorena Bobbit!

 
 


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